Over The Sky

A few more suggestions: --- Chigira: The screenplay had about 100 half-papers (note 10), so we made a selection where many of them were scrapped. Edit: "we made a selection where many of them were scrapped" -> "we produced a revised screen play in which many pages were scrapped." IN: Anyway speaking...

I took a quick look but edits seem minor. For example in note 5, could change to "A french auto maker, named after car designer Ettore Buggati. Buggati's are characterized by outstanding performance and a unique style..."